The Guardian of the Forest (Part 1)
by Zorlone on Oct.29, 2009, under Adventure
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The intruder ran along the river while Genu, the guardian of the forest, swiftly engaged in pursuit. As soon as Genu was seen, the intruder took the shape of a crocodile and dove in the wild water. Genu was astonished! He was confronted with another shifter like himself. So he changed into his favorite form and dove paws first, attempting to claw that tricky intruder. But, the crocodile obviously had the advantage in the water and escaped him.
There was no choice, but to resurface. His pride was hurt, yet he knew that he had to track and capture the intruder once again. He prepared himself then jumped in the empty air; transforming into an eagle. He took to the skies and searched with his mighty eyes. A shifter, after all, had a silver arrow shaped mark on their neck.
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A writing exercise from The Ivory Pen, this story, hopefully, would have more than one entry.
For Part 2, please read it HERE
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October 30th, 2009 on 10:18 am
Whoa.. ganda nung story… fave part ko yung naging eagle n sya. Galing!
October 30th, 2009 on 10:20 am
With creative writing, you can create anything from nothingness. You ought to start writing these stories in a novel form . I know the ideas are so many they're starting to crowd your mind , and they will, unless you start converting them into written texts…shifters, huh?….can't wait to read what novel you'll write for NANOWRIMO.
October 31st, 2009 on 8:34 pm
Oh Doc Z, I wanted to be one. Transform myself from one to another.
October 31st, 2009 on 11:37 pm
He he he… I hope to update this story more often. Thanks bro!
October 31st, 2009 on 11:38 pm
Will be using a different material for the NaNoWriMo. The other stories I made would keep coming out on my blogs. I have an idea right now, but I'm still working on it. I just hope to keep in line with my plot and outline. BTW, I have to make an outline in a few minutes. LOL
Z
October 31st, 2009 on 11:44 pm
susubaybayan ko ang story na to kuya z.
October 31st, 2009 on 11:58 pm
Madz, any particular form you'd want to be?
Z
November 1st, 2009 on 12:00 am
For that, I will be making an outline and I will make sure that you and Madz get an e-mail or a tweet saying that there is a new episode of Genu's story.
Z
November 1st, 2009 on 9:33 am
Wow! Nice story! Do you plan on writing a novel someday? Writer ka rin pala sa Helium
nice
November 1st, 2009 on 9:34 am
I was trying to post a comment dun sa losing weight article mo but can't and don't know how lolz : well this post can help on losing unwanted pounds din I dare to be fit 'n right with the FIT workout I'd appreciate your comment on the said post too doc. thanks!
November 1st, 2009 on 8:19 pm
No need, Kuya Z. I already subscribed on your feeds via e-mail.. hehe.
November 1st, 2009 on 11:56 pm
Hi Earth! Yep, someday soon. hehehe.
Just search zorlone at helium at lalabas ang mga articles and poems ko.
Thanks!
Z
November 1st, 2009 on 11:58 pm
If that was the article on Helium, I think you can only comment if you are a member, unless I'm wrong. LOL. I missed this link earlier. he he he. At least I found it already.
Keep burning those calories Earth!
Z
November 2nd, 2009 on 12:00 am
Ah… yes, i forgot about the feedburner and the RSS stuff on my blog bro. I have your blog listed on my google reader too.
Z
November 2nd, 2009 on 12:14 am
cool! thanks for subscribing. hehe
November 2nd, 2009 on 12:49 am
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Subject: [140flashfiction] Re: The Guardian of the Forest
November 9th, 2009 on 10:16 am
I love to be a dove Doc Z. To soar as high as I can be. But if I wanted to be alone, I also wanted to be a fish, I will swim to the heart of the ocean and cry, so that no one will know that I am crying, but the ocean can feel my tears
November 12th, 2009 on 2:39 pm
what a very cool intro.. is genu an animal?I’d like to have a cool pet like that.. hehe
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