His Memory of Her Home
by Zorlone on Nov.17, 2009, under Mystery
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The sun was already low in the horizon when he reached the familiar white residence.
Brian waited in anticipation to meet his former classmate, Mae. This would be their first meeting in six years after graduation. He wanted to surprise her; his memory of her home served him well. He traveled hundreds of miles, just to see her again.
With orange tulips and chocolates in his hands, a black coupe parked on the street and he saw her familiar figure. Mae didn’t change; everything about her was the same.
Her face lighted up when she saw him. “Brian!” she exclaimed, not entirely knowing what to say.
The passenger door opened, a small boy came out and looked at them. Brian’s heart felt light at the presence of the child who bore the same eyes and shape of his handsome face.
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November 17th, 2009 on 5:22 pm
wow… i’m blown away…
December 16th, 2009 on 7:15 pm
Mae,
I am glad you liked it.
Z
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November 18th, 2009 on 2:06 pm
If youth only knew; if age only could. – Henri Estienne
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December 16th, 2009 on 7:16 pm
Jan,
Uhm, thank you? hehehe. I don’t know what else to reply to that quote.
Z
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November 18th, 2009 on 4:21 pm
me ganung mga pangyayari nung nasa college pa sila? aaaawww! another good story from you ha… nice one! love it!
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December 16th, 2009 on 7:21 pm
Yatot,
These are the things that could happen and may have happened in real life.
Z
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November 18th, 2009 on 4:31 pm
Hmm… mejo confused ako kung anong nangyari.
Bakit sila nagkalayo?
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December 16th, 2009 on 7:22 pm
Richiem,
A lot of things happen after college, fate decided for them to live separately. At least they found themselves again.
Z
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November 18th, 2009 on 10:33 pm
Looks like Mae was not the only one surprised that day. Amazing the stories one can weave with only 140 words.
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December 16th, 2009 on 7:36 pm
Anne,
Thank you for the compliment. I try to do my best with 140 words.
Z
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November 18th, 2009 on 11:23 pm
Nice ending of the story. And just like Richie, it makes me wonder what happened during the interim. Way to go!
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November 19th, 2009 on 10:58 am
Very nice, great ending!
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November 20th, 2009 on 2:03 pm
You write very well. I enjoyed the story. Loved the ending.
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November 21st, 2009 on 11:45 pm
ah! what made brian leave in the first place? why did he come back?
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