Blue Lightning

by Zorlone on Oct.12, 2009, under Suspense/Thriller

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A frightfully long scream was heard in the cold darkness of the valley where Cassandra ran for her life. Her boyfriend laid  drowning in a pool of blood near their car. She never witnessed death unfold from her innocent eyes. Thomas was a fool to defend her, he couldn’t have matched the devilish strength that monster possessed.

She hesitated a moment; took out her father’s golden pendant.

“This will protect you from any danger,” were the words of her departed father.

It was too dark. She tripped on a root: fell, rolled, and twisted. Her body burned with bruises. The creature was on top of her, its fangs gaping with its foul breath.

Then a brilliant light protected her; almost instantly, blue lightning struck the creature from her fingers.

“Merlin’s magical blood runs through me,” she whispered in deafening silence.

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My friend dragonblogger, created a random twitter poem inspired by this story at Wandererthoughts – Poetry and Literature by Dragon Blogger. Thank you so much Justin!

TRIVIA:
After I wrote this story, I looked for information pertaining to Merlin’s legacy. I found out that there was a book written by Quinn Taylor Evans. Coincidentally, the character in this story has lightning powers, ergo light. It fit the character of Merlin’s third daughter in the book. So, I changed the name of my character here to Cassandra.

I hope you enjoyed my early Halloween story.

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About the author: Zorlone

"Telling stories 140 words at a time" may not be the best way to tell stories, but what started as a challenge to oneself, turned into a website of flash fiction. Follow me @Twitter or visit me at Zorlone.


12 Comments for this entry

  • Jena Isle

    Hey , how did you know the Merlin series is my favorite…he he he. You're digging into a gold mine, Z. These are gems. I'm serious about compiling them all in a book. Have you watched the new Merlin series from BBC? They are splendid ! You could derive more inspiration from there. Way to go!

  • Jena Isle

    Btw, do create a link from your Zorlone.com to here para madaling puntahan, thanks.

  • zorlone

    On hindsight, I remember one of your posts was about that TV show. I still haven't downloaded it. he he he. I have to remind myself to do that too.

    Maybe it wasn't entirely by chance, but the story unfolded as I wrote it down. Anyway, maybe that's one of the wonders of how the human mind works.

    Z

  • zorlone

    Thanks Jen,

    It's done already.

    Z

  • jhongmed

    I love those medieval age stories. King Arthur, Knights and Sword Fights…

    Way to go Doc Z, I hope you could make more stories like this.

    Jhong Medina

  • zorlone

    Thanks Jhong! This one will go to my list. Maybe a sequel or something. he he he.

    Ah, but I haven't used the other weapons yet… yikes! Will do it in the next story. ;)

    Z

  • reyjr

    Do you know the 80s cartoon Visionaries? We were watching it last weekend and the lead magical character there is Merklin. Lol! Rip off! Haha! Yet I still love that cartoon. Heh heh heh.

    Eto na ba yung 140 words only? Galing ah!

  • zorlone

    Reyjr,

    I'm a cartoon addict! Of course I know that. he he he. Oo nga ano, rip off nga yun. LOL. ;)

    Z

  • jhongmed

    I love those medieval age stories. King Arthur, Knights and Sword Fights…

    Way to go Doc Z, I hope you could make more stories like this.

    Jhong Medina

  • zorlone

    Thanks Jhong! This one will go to my list. Maybe a sequel or something. he he he.

    Ah, but I haven't used the other weapons yet… yikes! Will do it in the next story. ;)

    Z

  • reyjr

    Do you know the 80s cartoon Visionaries? We were watching it last weekend and the lead magical character there is Merklin. Lol! Rip off! Haha! Yet I still love that cartoon. Heh heh heh.

    Eto na ba yung 140 words only? Galing ah!

  • zorlone

    Reyjr,

    I'm a cartoon addict! Of course I know that. he he he. Oo nga ano, rip off nga yun. LOL. ;)

    Z

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